Writing Score Sheet

SELF/ PEER EDIT: https://docs.google.com/document/d/14u-0ldvQki64oDyFO3HiqDHgQ7_PxAnNkTKY0mb0BKI/edit#

 

Teacher’s grade sheet for 11B: Narratives; and 6-item Writing Test.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11tN8xtoqp1fLe_m1dug6wtUKb4_g2T8uvCkIjzwmBjo/edit

 

Approved narratives must show at least nine of the following:

  1. Written in 3rd-PERSON (or second person).  YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.
  2. Orients the reader by using several sensory details . YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.
  3. Includes contrasts.  YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.
  4. Effectively uses echoism (a.k.a. onomatopoeia).   YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.
  5. Consistently uses specific and precise words.  YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.
  6. Use actions to describe details.  YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.
  7. Shows time of day without telling.  YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.
  8. Shows time of year without telling.  YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.
  9. Each paragraph from one viewpoint.  YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.
  10. Effectively uses figurative language.  YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.

 

Approved Paragraphs (and arguments) must show all of at least nine of the ten following guidelines:

  1. Avoids use of sentence fragments or run-ons unless used intentionally and effectively.

YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.

2) Uses parallel structure.

YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.

3) Uses the active voice.

YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.

4) Uses correct spelling.

YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.

5) Uses correct punctuation.

YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.

6) Establishes focus of paragraph with a topic sentence.

YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.

7) Topic sentence clearly states the main subject with specific words.

YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.

8) Includes significant, specific, and relevant details.

YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.

9) Transitions from general to specific statements and details.

YES!   Writing needs some work in this area.

10) Include appropriate concluding or transitional statement.

 

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